Tour improvements #205
gvdongenAnnotations
1 error, 8 warnings, and 10 notices
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[vale] docs/tour.mdx#L243:
docs/tour.mdx#L243
[write-good.So] Don't start a sentence with 'So '.
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[vale] docs/tour.mdx#L90:
docs/tour.mdx#L90
[Google.We] Try to avoid using first-person plural like 'we'.
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[vale] docs/tour.mdx#L196:
docs/tour.mdx#L196
[write-good.Passive] 'are serialized' may be passive voice. Use active voice if you can.
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[vale] docs/tour.mdx#L197:
docs/tour.mdx#L197
[write-good.TooWordy] 'Therefore' is too wordy.
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[vale] docs/tour.mdx#L243:
docs/tour.mdx#L243
[Google.Will] Avoid using 'will'.
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[vale] docs/tour.mdx#L243:
docs/tour.mdx#L243
[write-good.Weasel] 'only' is a weasel word!
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[vale] docs/tour.mdx#L243:
docs/tour.mdx#L243
[write-good.Passive] 'were invoked' may be passive voice. Use active voice if you can.
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[vale] docs/tour.mdx#L244:
docs/tour.mdx#L244
[write-good.Weasel] 'successfully' is a weasel word!
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[vale] docs/tour.mdx#L246:
docs/tour.mdx#L246
[write-good.Passive] 'was omitted' may be passive voice. Use active voice if you can.
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[vale] docs/tour.mdx#L103:
docs/tour.mdx#L103
[Google.Parens] Use parentheses judiciously.
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[vale] docs/tour.mdx#L116:
docs/tour.mdx#L116
[Google.Parens] Use parentheses judiciously.
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[vale] docs/tour.mdx#L196:
docs/tour.mdx#L196
[write-good.E-Prime] Try to avoid using 'are'.
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[vale] docs/tour.mdx#L196:
docs/tour.mdx#L196
[Google.Passive] In general, use active voice instead of passive voice ('are serialized').
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[vale] docs/tour.mdx#L242:
docs/tour.mdx#L242
[write-good.E-Prime] Try to avoid using 'be'.
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[vale] docs/tour.mdx#L243:
docs/tour.mdx#L243
[write-good.E-Prime] Try to avoid using 'is'.
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[vale] docs/tour.mdx#L243:
docs/tour.mdx#L243
[write-good.E-Prime] Try to avoid using 'were'.
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[vale] docs/tour.mdx#L243:
docs/tour.mdx#L243
[Google.Passive] In general, use active voice instead of passive voice ('were invoked').
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[vale] docs/tour.mdx#L246:
docs/tour.mdx#L246
[write-good.E-Prime] Try to avoid using 'was'.
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[vale] docs/tour.mdx#L246:
docs/tour.mdx#L246
[Google.Passive] In general, use active voice instead of passive voice ('was omitted').
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