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diff --git a/data/changelog/ocaml/2023-09-14-ocaml-5.1.0.md b/data/changelog/ocaml/2023-09-14-ocaml-5.1.0.md
@@ -12,7 +12,8 @@ release of OCaml version 5.1.0.
 
 Some of the highlights in OCaml 5.1.0 are:
 
-   - Many runtime performance regression and memory-leak fixes (dynlinking, weak array, weak hash sets, GC with idle domains, GC prefetching).
+   - Many runtime performance regression and memory-leaks fixes
+   (dynlinking, weak array, weak hash sets, GC with idle domains, GC prefetching).
    - Restored support for native code generation on RISC-V and s390x architectures.
    - Restored Cygwin port.
    - Reduced installation size (50% reduction)
@@ -31,10 +32,10 @@ OCaml 5.1.0 is still a relatively experimental release compared to the OCaml
    - Ephemeron performances need to be investigated.
    - GC compaction is a work in progress.
    - statmemprof is a work in progress.
-   - There are a number of known runtime concurrency bugs (that triggers under
+   - There are a number of known runtime concurrency bugs (that trigger under
      rare circumstances) 
 
-We are planning to address those regressions, hopefully in the next release OCaml 5.2.0. Meanwhile, the OCaml 4.14 branch will be maintained and the next release on the OCaml 4.14 branch, OCaml 4.14.2, should follow this release in the upcoming months.
+We are planning to address those regressions, hopefully in time for the OCaml 5.2.0 release for some of them. Meanwhile, the OCaml 4.14 branch will be maintained and the next release on the OCaml 4.14 branch, OCaml 4.14.2, should follow this release in the upcoming months.
 
 
 Please report any unexpected behaviours on the [OCaml issue tracker](https://github.com/ocaml/ocaml/issues)

diff --git a/data/releases/5.1.0.md b/data/releases/5.1.0.md
@@ -9,9 +9,9 @@ intro: |
 
   This release is available as an [opam](/p/ocaml/5.1.0) package.
 highlights: |
-  Some of the highlights in OCaml 5.1.0 are:
 
-   - Many runtime performance regression and memory-leak fixes (dynlinking, weak array, weak hash sets, GC with idle domains, GC prefetching).
+   - Many runtime performance regression and memory-leaks fixes
+   (dynlinking, weak array, weak hash sets, GC with idle domains, GC prefetching).
    - Restored support for native code generation on RISC-V and s390x architectures.
    - Restored Cygwin port.
    - Reduced installation size (50% reduction)
@@ -47,7 +47,7 @@ OCaml 5.1.0 is still a relatively experimental release compared to the OCaml
    - Ephemeron performances need to be investigated.
    - GC compaction is a work in progress.
    - statmemprof is a work in progress.
-   - There are a number of known runtime concurrency bugs (that triggers under
+   - There are a number of known runtime concurrency bugs (that trigger under
      rare circumstances)
 
 For a comprehensive list of changes and details on all new features,