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Co-authored-by: Wes Hinsley <[email protected]>

R/windows.R

@@ -7,8 +7,9 @@
 ##' the same as your Imperial credentials.  We store this information
 ##' securely using the [keyring](https://keyring.r-lib.org/) package,
 ##' so when unlocking your credentials you will be prompted for your
-##' **computer** password, which might differ from either your DIDE or
-##' Imperial password if you are not on a windows machine.
+##' **computer** password, which will be your DIDE password if you use a windows
+##' machine connected to the DIDE domain, but will likely differ from either your DIDE or
+##' Imperial password if you are outside the DIDE domain, or if you don't use Windows.
 ##'
 ##' @title DIDE windows credentials
 ##'