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@@ -101,18 +101,18 @@ <h1>Community Building</h1>
       <p>Actions that <a href="https://confluence.hl7.org/display/COD/CodeX+Home">CodeX</a> has found indispensable include (a) Engaging Champions, (b) Establishing Governance, (c) Growing the Community, and (d) Communicating Value Propositions that Enable Growth.  These actions are expanded upon below.</p>
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       <h2>Champions</h2>
-      <p>An essential first step when starting a new specialty initiative or starting a new Use Case within that initiative is for "Champions" to step-up to lead. In CodeX, successful Champions are organizations and individuals that will:</p>
+      <p>An essential first step when starting a new specialty initiative or starting a new Use Case within that initiative is for "Champions" to step-up to lead. In CodeX, successful Champions are organizations and individuals that:</p>
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         <li><b>Commit to lead</b> the initiative and/or Use Case</li>
-        <li><b>Know</b> the challenges, opportunities, organizations, people, and possibly-related initiatives within the larger specialty Community</li>
+        <li><b>Know</b> the challenges and opportunities (and potential Use Cases), organizations, people, and possibly-related initiatives within the larger specialty Community</li>
         <li><b>Command the attention</b> of a larger Community and can <b>influence</b> future users and stakeholders to engage</li>
         <li><b>Motivate implementation</b> of new standards into vendor solutions</li>
         <li><b>Motivate the changes in health processes</b> needed to use and benefit from of the standards-based systems </li>
-        <li><b>Muster the resources</b> needed to succeed</li>
-        <li><b>Drive</b> one more key tracks of the initiative: Community Engagement, Use Case Prioritization, Standards Development, Implementation & Pilots, Adoption & Value</li>
+        <li><b>Attract the resources</b> needed to succeed</li>
+        <li><b>Drive</b> one more key tracks of the initiative and/or Use Case: Community Engagement, Use Case Prioritization, Standards Development, Implementation & Pilots, Adoption & Value</li>
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       <p>Champions and all who actively participate will most likely understand the challenges for which standards-based data interoperability provide substantial benefits. They'll have or develop a shared vision for a future where patient data can be collected once, and then used with no or little manipulation for many Use Cases around patient care, research and other applications.</p>
-      <p>It's clear that Champions have significant responsibilities.  But they also realize future benefits in terms of defining direction, achieving objectives, and ultimately improving health care and research within their orgazniations and across the landscape. </p>
+      <p>It's clear that Champions have significant responsibilities.  But they also realize future benefits in terms of prioritizing Use Cases, defining direction, achieving objectives, and ultimately improving health care and research within their orgazniations and across the landscape. </p>
       <p>Large, medical professional societies and Government organizations have been the most frequent CodeX Use Case Champions, but other stakeholders have also been effective Champions. The founding Champions for the overall CodeX initiative (which started by addressing challenges in oncology) were <a href="https://www.asco.org">American Society of Clinical Oncology (ASCO)</a>, with reach to all oncologists and centers; and <a href="https://www.mitre.org">The MITRE Corporation</a>, with deep expertise in convening, FHIR standards and systems engineering. </p>
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