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@@ -62,13 +62,13 @@ <h2>Access Hobu</h2>
 open source geospatial tools over Slack or Teams or equivalent &quot;single user&quot;
 or &quot;guest&quot; channel</li>
 <li>&quot;Business hours&quot; communication responsiveness</li>
-<li>Severable by either party for any reason by the with notification by 1st of
+<li>Severable by either party for any reason by notification by 1st of
 the month</li>
 <li>Monthly invoice $2,000</li>
 </ul>
 <p>Knowing what is possible with open source software and then knowing the pathway
 to achieve success requires significant investment and experience. Access Hobu
-gives your team the option to jump start that investment in regard to the
+gives your team the option to boost your investment in
 technologies that Hobu has developed and managed over two decades in the open
 source geospatial industry.</p>
 <div class="section" id="benefits">
@@ -86,15 +86,15 @@ <h3>Benefits</h3>
 <p>Open source support activities:</p>
 <ul class="simple">
 <li>Bug fixing</li>
-<li>Software demonstration construction</li>
+<li>Construction of demonstration software</li>
 <li>Documentation</li>
 <li>Open source debugging</li>
 <li>Open source packaging support (conda, etc)</li>
 <li>Open source roadmap</li>
 </ul>
 <p>Consulting and advice on point cloud challenges:</p>
 <ul class="simple">
-<li>Data organization and formatting for national scale data</li>
+<li>Data organization and formatting for national-scale data</li>
 <li>Visualization options</li>
 <li>Cloud computing engineering support</li>
 <li>Computing efficiency</li>
@@ -126,7 +126,7 @@ <h4>Why should we pay for support for software that costs us nothing?</h4>
 </div>
 <div class="section" id="can-t-we-just-hire-you-hourly">
 <h4>Can't we just hire you hourly?</h4>
-<p>Our minimum hourly engagement is $20,000 USD.</p>
+<p>Our minimum hourly-based total engagement is $20,000 USD.</p>
 </div>
 <div class="section" id="we-can-quit-any-time-we-want">
 <h4>We can quit any time we want?</h4>
@@ -142,8 +142,9 @@ <h4>Only Teams or Slack?</h4>
 </div>
 <div class="section" id="can-t-we-just-ask-our-questions-on-a-mailing-list">
 <h4>Can't we just ask our questions on a mailing list?</h4>
-<p>Of course, but no one owes you an answer. We will, and if we don't know, we
-will reach out to our contacts in the community to try and find one for you.</p>
+<p>Of course, but no one owes you an answer. We will respond, and if we don't know
+the answer , we will reach out to our contacts in the community to try and find
+one for you.</p>
 </div>
 </div>
 <div class="section" id="sign-up">