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gabrielcocenza committed Mar 21, 2024
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2 changes: 0 additions & 2 deletions docs/.custom_wordlist.txt
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frictionless
COU
cou
colocated
COUModel
SIGINT
SIGINTs
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juju
libjuju
VPN
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OpenStackApplication
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14 changes: 8 additions & 6 deletions docs/how-to/plan-upgrade.rst
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cou plan data-plane
**Note:**

- It's essential to complete the upgrade of the **control-plane** components before being able to
generate a plan for the **data-plane**.
- By default, this command will skip hypervisors from the planning that have VMs running. See the
`Plan for non-empty hypervisors`_ section to include them.
- By default, this command will skip hypervisors that have VMs running from the planning. See the
`Plan for non-empty hypervisors`_ section for instructions on how to include them.


Plan for the hypervisors
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# plan for all empty hypervisors that are into zone-1
cou plan hypervisors --availability-zone=zone-1
**Note:**:
**Note:**

- Those specific filters are mutually exclusive, meaning that it's not possible
to use them together.
- Since **hypervisors** comprise a subset of **data-plane** components, it is
also necessary to complete the upgrade of the **control-plane** components before
being able to generate a plan for the **hypervisors**.
- By default, this command will skip hypervisors from the planning that have VMs running. See the
`Plan for non-empty hypervisors`_ section to include them.
the **hypervisors** can be upgraded.
- By default, this command will skip hypervisors that have VMs running from the planning . See the
`Plan for non-empty hypervisors`_ section for instructions on how to include them.


Plan for non-empty hypervisors
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11 changes: 4 additions & 7 deletions docs/how-to/upgrade-cloud.rst
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cou upgrade data-plane
**Note:**

- It's essential to complete the upgrade of the **control-plane** components before
being able to upgrade the **data-plane**.
- By default, this command will not upgrade hypervisors that have VMs running. See the
`Upgrade non-empty hypervisors`_ section to include them.
`Upgrade non-empty hypervisors`_ section for instructions on how to include them.


Run upgrade for the hypervisors
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cou upgrade hypervisors --availability-zone=zone-1
**Note:**

- Those specific filters are mutually exclusive, meaning that it's not possible
to use them together.
- Since **hypervisors** comprise a subset of **data-plane** components, it is
also necessary to complete the upgrade of the **control-plane** components before
the **hypervisors** can be upgraded.
- By default, this command will not upgrade hypervisors that have VMs running. See the
`Upgrade non-empty hypervisors`_ section to include them.
`Upgrade non-empty hypervisors`_ section for instructions on how to include them.

Upgrade non-empty hypervisors
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:input: cou upgrade --auto-approve --quiet

Upgrade completed.


.. LINKS
.. _all-in-one: https://docs.openstack.org/charm-guide/latest/admin/upgrades/openstack.html#perform-the-upgrade
.. _paused-single-unit: https://docs.openstack.org/charm-guide/latest/admin/upgrades/openstack.html#perform-the-upgrade

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