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@@ -9,16 +9,20 @@ Potential known upgrade bugs and non-standard procedures are listed in the OpenS
 Manila Ganesha
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-The manila-ganesha_ charm was wrongly tracking the version of ceph package instead of the manila
-and an error like this can happen when running COU:
+Certain versions of the manila-ganesha charm incorrectly report their workload version, which
+can lead to false positive COU errors resembling the following one:
+
 
 .. code:: bash
 
     [WARNING] Not possible to find the charm manila-ganesha in the lookup
     [ERROR] 'manila-ganesha' with workload version 17.1.0 has no compatible OpenStack release.
 
-In that case ,refresh the current channel of the charm to receive the fix and then run COU again.
+See `bug 2060751`_ for details.
+
+If affected, refresh the manila-ganesha charm to its most recent version (within the same release
+channel) and re-run COU.
 
 .. LINKS:
 .. _Issues, charm procedures, and OpenStack upgrade notes: https://docs.openstack.org/charm-guide/latest/project/issues-and-procedures.html
-.. _manila-ganesha: https://bugs.launchpad.net/charm-manila-ganesha/+bug/2060751
+.. _bug 2060751: https://bugs.launchpad.net/charm-manila-ganesha/+bug/2060751