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 Although this section of the toolkit is focused on advocating within your institution, a lot of it may also apply to how you work with partner organisations to support them to develop and deploy digital tools in sustainable ways. Here are a few tools and talking points: 
 
-* [International Energy Association reports](https://www.iea.org/analysis?type=report)
-* Our World in Data, [CO2 and Greenhouse Gas emissions](https://ourworldindata.org/co2-and-greenhouse-gas-emissions)
-* [Julie's Bicycle](https://juliesbicycle.com/) has lots of resources for arts organisations especially (not just focused on digital sustainability)
-* [The Networked Condition](https://thenetworkedcondition.com/) is a project about "the environmental impact of the creation and delivery of artworks using digital technology," including a carbon calculator
-* [Sustainability: A Surprisingly Successful KPI](https://climateaction.tech/blog/sustainability-kpi-greenops-survey-results/)
-* Joe McGrath, ['Cost as a Proxy for Carbon: The Inconvenient Truth'](https://www.kainos.com/insights/blogs/cost-as-a-proxy-for-carbon-the-inconvenient-truth-part-1)
+* [International Energy Association reports](https://www.iea.org/analysis?type=report) and Our World in Data's [CO2 and Greenhouse Gas emissions](https://ourworldindata.org/co2-and-greenhouse-gas-emissions) provide some useful high-level context - decarbonising the digital is important and urgent, but we should also make sure we keep things in proportion (and don't miss out on easy, impactful actions outside of the digital).
+* [Julie's Bicycle](https://juliesbicycle.com/) has lots of resources for arts organisations especially (not just focused on digital sustainability).
+* [The Networked Condition](https://thenetworkedcondition.com/) is a project about "the environmental impact of the creation and delivery of artworks using digital technology," including a carbon calculator.
+* [Sustainability: A Surprisingly Successful KPI](https://climateaction.tech/blog/sustainability-kpi-greenops-survey-results/).
+* Joe McGrath, ['Cost as a Proxy for Carbon: The Inconvenient Truth'](https://www.kainos.com/insights/blogs/cost-as-a-proxy-for-carbon-the-inconvenient-truth-part-1).
 * From the Green Software Foundation, [The Green Software Maturity Matrix](https://github.com/Green-Software-Foundation/green-software-maturity-matrix) is a self-assessment tool for organisations to "understand the extent to which they have implemented green principles, patterns, and processes for building and operating their software systems."
 * [TOSS](https://github.com/Green-Software-Foundation/toss) is a work-in-progress (as of 2024) from the Green Software Foundation which focuses on organisational change, and seeks to "describe a framework incorporating a method that is focused on a decision tree approach. It would also reveal where voids exist, providing ideas for future initiatives."
-* Carbon Literacy Project offer a variety of sector-specific [Carbon Literacy Toolkits](https://carbonliteracy.com/toolkits/)
+* Carbon Literacy Project offer a variety of sector-specific [Carbon Literacy Toolkits](https://carbonliteracy.com/toolkits/).
 * Digital Decarbonisation, [Data Carbon Scorecard](https://digitaldecarb.org/data-carbon-scorecard/) is a lightweight tool for quickly evaluating the potential carbon impacts of a new data related project
-* Proposal for a [Technology Carbon Standard](https://www.techcarbonstandard.org/)
+* Proposal for a [Technology Carbon Standard](https://www.techcarbonstandard.org/).
+* Of course, the digital is not the enemy of the sustainable. Digital technology has a huge role to play in a rapid and just climate transition. [Rasoldier et al. (2023)](https://inria.hal.science/hal-03949261/document) offer some thought-provoking questions we can use to scrutinise the promised benefits of digital innovation.
 
 ## Get involved in supply decisions {#supply-decisions}