blog: update quests article

frontend/public/posts/2024-02-01-quests.md

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   - name: "Ore Ogundipe"
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-Maintaining a lifestyle that contributes to your longevity can sometimes be an extreme sport.
-
-We sometime discount the amount of work required to see progress which eventually leads to dropping the goals and the personalized prompts we optimistically set.
+Maintaining a lifestyle that contributes to your longevity can be difficult. We sometimes discount the amount of work required to see progress which eventually leads to dropping the goals and the personalized prompts we optimistically set.
 
 We designed **Quests**, to help you track activities, share results with others, and engage deeply with people that matter to you. In this article, we'll explore what Quests are, how they work, and how you can get started.
 
@@ -28,24 +26,24 @@ At its core quests are ways to deploy tools for behavioral and health research.
 
 We believe in the power of community, and quests provide a platform to connect with your friends, family, or even a supportive virtual community, while tracking your activities and achieving your well-being goals together.
 
-- Increased Motivation: Tracking progress alongside others will keep you accountable and motivated.
-- Create Connections: Share your experiences with people that matter to you, motivate each other, and celebrate milestones together.
 - Share your health changes with others and see how you compare with the group.
 - Behavioral Insights (For Researchers): Design custom quests with specific prompts to study targeted behaviors on trends and patterns without any geographical limits.
+- Increased Motivation: Tracking progress alongside others will keep you accountable and motivated.
+- Create Connections: Share your experiences with people that matter to you, motivate each other, and celebrate milestones together.
 
 ## How to Join a Quest
 
-Joining a quest is easy with the Fusion Copilot app. Follow these steps:
+To join a quest on the Fusion Copilot app. Follow these steps:
 
 <img src="/images/blog/quest_flow.jpg" alt="How to join a quest" data-zoomable style="cursor: zoom-in;" />
 
+Use the code **u7uc39** on your Fusion Copilot app to get started.
+
 - Open the Fusion Copilot App
 - Tap on the bottom right corner of the app where it states 'Quests'.
 - Enter the quest code provided to you by the quest creator.
 - Start tracking your activities and sharing your progress with the quest community.
 
-**Use the code (u7uc39) on your Fusion Copilot app to get started.**
-
 ## How to Create a Quest
 
 Navigate to the [NeuroFusion Explorer](https://usefusion.ai/quests) dashboard using your web browser.
@@ -65,4 +63,4 @@ We understand that privacy is crucial, especially when it comes to personal data
 
 We can't wait to see what quests you'll co-create. Let us know if you run into any issues!
 
-With love, NEUROFUSION Research, Inc
+With care, NEUROFUSION Research, Inc