diff --git a/src/pages/developers/apps/advantages.mdx b/src/pages/developers/apps/advantages.mdx
index 6d85cacb..0c7bf634 100644
--- a/src/pages/developers/apps/advantages.mdx
+++ b/src/pages/developers/apps/advantages.mdx
@@ -55,10 +55,10 @@ transfer value using native tokens across all connected chains. This means users
 can perform transactions involving the actual native assets of each blockchain,
 rather than wrapped or synthetic versions.
 
-For example, a user can send native USDC from Ethereum directly to Polygon, or
+For example, users can send native USDC from Ethereum directly to Polygon, or
 swap native BTC from the Bitcoin network for PEPE tokens on Ethereum. This
-cross-chain token transfer functionality enhances liquidity and provides a more
-seamless experience for users, who no longer need to rely on intermediaries or
+cross-chain token transfer functionality enhances liquidity and provides a
+seamless experience, eliminating the need for intermediaries or
 complex token wrapping mechanisms.
 
 To facilitate these transfers, universal apps have access to unified liquidity