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Close review loopholes from dropping Proposed Recommendation #927

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Ensure the Recommendation published after AC Review corresponds to the text submitted to AC Review and the Patent Exlusion Opportunity.

See #919


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@frivoal frivoal added the Agenda+ Marks issues that are ready for discussion on the call label Oct 8, 2024
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[=Advisory Committee representatives=] <em class="rfc2119">may</em> initiate an [=Advisory Committee Appeal=]
of the decision to advance the technical report.

The newly published [=Recommendation=]
<em class=rfc2119>must not</em> have any [=substantive changes=] to the document
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<em class=rfc2119>must not</em> have any [=substantive changes=] to the document
<em class=rfc2119>must not</em> include any [=substantive changes=] made to the document

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How about just "must not include any substantive changes [ from | compared to ] the [=Candidate Recommendation Snapshot=]"?

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that phrasing sounds like it may be permissible to include substantive changes (other than dropping at risk) so long as they haven't been made to the document since CRS. They could, for example, be prepared on the side by the Team in response to AC Review. That wouldn't be appropriate.

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<em class=rfc2119>must not</em> have any [=substantive changes=] to the document
<em class=rfc2119>must not</em> make any [=substantive changes=] to the document

together with

- since the [=Candidate Recommendation Snapshot=]
+ compared to the [=Candidate Recommendation Snapshot=]

@fantasai fantasai changed the title Close review loops when dropping Pull Request Close review loops when dropping Proposed Recommendation Oct 8, 2024
@fantasai fantasai changed the title Close review loops when dropping Proposed Recommendation Close review loopholes from dropping Proposed Recommendation Oct 8, 2024
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This change looks good to me as-is, and I'm ok with the handful of variants suggested edits as well, but leave those to the judgment of the Editor to decide as to what makes the most sense, and fits best in the flow and understanding of the document.

Ensure the Recommendation published after AC Review corresponds
to the text submitted to AC Review and the Patent Exlusion Opportunity.

See w3c#919
@frivoal frivoal added Closed: Accepted The issue has been addressed, though not necessarily based on the initial suggestion and removed Agenda+ Marks issues that are ready for discussion on the call labels Oct 9, 2024
@frivoal frivoal merged commit fb77fca into w3c:main Oct 9, 2024
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@frivoal frivoal deleted the rec-transition-refinement branch October 9, 2024 15:47
@frivoal frivoal added this to the Process 2024/2025 milestone Oct 9, 2024
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