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Plain English #80

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TimTaylor opened this issue Jan 3, 2019 · 2 comments
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Plain English #80

TimTaylor opened this issue Jan 3, 2019 · 2 comments

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Consider writing some sections more plainly. For example, the language used in the section below could be simplified and the sentenced shortened:

This [bookdown](https://bookdown.org/yihui/bookdown/) manual uses the *eesectors* package to help elucidate the RAP development process. It attempts to amalgamate the learnings of the early pioneers of RAP into a maintained tome of knowledge to ensure good practice is accessible for RAP newbies.

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nacnudus commented Jan 3, 2019

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@tjtnew thanks for opening this issue. I've migrated it to the RAP website repo where it is now more relevant ukgovdatascience/rap-website#2.

I'll close this one because the original RAP Companion is going to be left alone so that we don't accidentally undermine the MOOC, which refers to it. I would be very grateful for a review of the new content (not the RAP companion, which will gradually be superseded) according to the GOV.UK guidelines https://www.gov.uk/guidance/content-design/writing-for-gov-uk.

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