Editorial changes #37
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Escaping backslash is not required in \verb environment, and shows up in both PDF and HTML output.
Arguably it should be replaced instead by "and/or" or maybe "and".
Improves PDF formatting.
For xtypes hms and dms follow the practice in the rest of the document of noting that arraysize="*" can be replaced with definite values if known.
Change the text in the VOSI-availability and VOSI-capabilities sections to match the revised policy about required VOSI services from the table in Section 2.
Remove the stanza declaring the VOSI-availability from the VOSI-capabilities example. The example wasn't wrong, since availability may still optionally be present and declared, but the majority of new services will probably not include availability, and the example is more compact without it. You could also do something similar in section 1.2.
Replace the text "not allowed (highly discouraged?)" [I presume a marker for an editorial decision to be made later] with "highly discouraged". You could go the other way and write "not allowed" instead, but IMO highly discouraged is good enough.
Add "where possible" to the MAXREC section in acknowledgement of the fact that not all output formats support overflow flagging. Add a crossreference from the Overflow section back to the MAXREC section.
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Mar 21, 2024
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