From 4af31f6ced1fd20a0caaf7b6e8dfd956b92d4667 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Henry Merrilees <hmerrilees@hmc.edu>
Date: Sun, 20 Aug 2023 03:39:02 -0700
Subject: [PATCH] readme

---
 README.md   | 4 ++--
 src/main.rs | 4 ++--
 2 files changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

diff --git a/README.md b/README.md
index f58456d..c5f746b 100644
--- a/README.md
+++ b/README.md
@@ -20,7 +20,7 @@ distributed systems programming ▬▬▬
                           steno ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬
                     weekly repo
 ```
-> As time elapses through the weekly repo's period, the bar will fill.
+> As time elapses through the weekly repo's period, the bar will fill like the rest.
 
 Looks like I haven't done steno in a while... when I get stuck with whatever I'm doing, I'll switch to that.
 
@@ -40,7 +40,7 @@ Developing skill takes time + structure. prac attempts to promote both while bei
 To remain lightweight, prac sticks only to problems that (to me) most obviously need solving:
 - "What should I do now?" in instances where pre-planning is inadviseable or impossible,
 - losing track of practices I haven't done in a while, and
-- progress and time tracking without excessive overhead or breaking flow.
+- progress/time tracking without excessive overhead or breaking flow.
 
 ### What's so special about prac?
 Not much, and that's on purpose, but there are a few key differences:
diff --git a/src/main.rs b/src/main.rs
index dacdff4..bec7394 100644
--- a/src/main.rs
+++ b/src/main.rs
@@ -17,7 +17,7 @@
 //!                           steno ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬
 //!                     weekly repo
 //! ```
-//! > As time elapses through the weekly repo's period, the bar will fill.
+//! > As time elapses through the weekly repo's period, the bar will fill like the rest.
 //!
 //! Looks like I haven't done steno in a while... when I get stuck with whatever I'm doing, I'll switch to that.
 //!
@@ -37,7 +37,7 @@
 //! To remain lightweight, prac sticks only to problems that (to me) most obviously need solving:
 //! - "What should I do now?" in instances where pre-planning is inadviseable or impossible,
 //! - losing track of practices I haven't done in a while, and
-//! - progress and time tracking without excessive overhead or breaking flow.
+//! - progress/time tracking without excessive overhead or breaking flow.
 //!
 //! ## What's so special about prac?
 //! Not much, and that's on purpose, but there are a few key differences: