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simplifying language, minor edits #683

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I wanted to improve the last paragraph, too, but I don't even understand it well enough - maybe someone else can give it a shot? It's really confusing:

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I wanted to improve the last paragraph, too, but I don't even understand it well enough  - maybe someone else can give it a shot? It's really confusing: 

**Note**: For single recipient transmissions: if an email address is suppressed the API response for the rejection will appear inline. However, if you are using multiple recipient transmissions, the API response will initially accept addresses which will be suppressed later in the message generation process. For multiple recipient transmissions which contain a suppressed address, you will notice that an injection event is recorded before the ultimate suppression, but an injection event is not recorded for a single recipient, inline suppression.
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The last paragraph still needs work, it's very confusing, but I don't understand it well enough to make meaningful changes... -_-

@svalsdottir svalsdottir changed the title Simplifying language, minor edits simplifying language, minor edits Sep 7, 2022
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